106. Passing by the Xiangji Temple | Wang Wei
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English translation
Original Chinese text
不知香积寺,数里入云峰。
English translation
Not knowing where Xiangji Temple is, I go several li into the cloudy peaks.
The poem opens on not knowing — no idea where the temple is, only going into the hills. The opening sets the search in motion: the temple is not yet in sight and the road is already long.
Original Chinese text
古木无人径,深山何处钟。
English translation
Towering ancient trees and no path where anyone walks; deep in the hills, from where the bell?
'No path where anyone walks' evokes the wildness; 'from where the bell?' means the temple is heard but not seen. This couplet captures the suspense of searching for the temple—the bell is the only clue.
Original Chinese text
泉声咽危石,日色冷青松。
English translation
The spring chokes among high rocks; the sunlight is cold on the green pines.
Chokes and cold are exact: the water is stopped by stone and so chokes, and sunlight among dense pines looks cold. These two words are where the poem forges.
Original Chinese text
薄暮空潭曲,安禅制毒龙。
English translation
At dusk, by the curving empty pool, sitting in meditation to tame the poison dragon.
The poison dragon comes from Buddhist scripture and figures the mind's delusion and desire. The last couplet names the theme: sit in meditation by the empty pool and subdue the mind's demon.
赏析 · Commentary
「不知」开头的效果 · The Effect of Opening on Not Knowing
写访寺诗,常见的开头是交代时间和地点,比如「清晨入古寺」。王维却从「不知」起笔:不知道寺在哪里,只管往山里走。这样就产生了悬念——读者跟着诗人一起找,而「深山何处钟」把悬念推高:听见钟声,却不知寺在何方。直到最后,寺也不一定出现了,出现的是「空潭」和「安禅」。访寺诗的重点从「找到寺」变成了「找到心境」,这是王维的高明处。
Poems on visiting temples usually open by giving time and place, as in at dawn I enter the old temple. Wang Wei opens on not knowing: no idea where the temple is, only walking into the hills. Suspense follows — the reader searches along with the poet — and deep in the hills, from where the bell raises it: the bell is heard, the temple's whereabouts unknown. To the end the temple need not appear at all; what appears is the empty pool and sitting in meditation. The weight of a visit poem shifts from finding the temple to finding a state of mind, and that is Wang Wei's finesse.
「咽」和「冷」两个字 · The Two Words Chokes and Cold
「泉声咽危石」的「咽」字,把泉水被石头挡住、声音变得幽咽的状态写出来了。水本来是畅流的,遇到高石才有阻塞之感,一个「咽」字里有水和石的关系。「日色冷青松」的「冷」字同理:日光是暖的,但照在密密的松林里,显出来的是冷色。两个字都是景物作用于感官的结果,不是景物本身。王维写景,常在这种细微的感官转换上下功夫。
The word chokes in the spring chokes among high rocks writes the water stopped by stone and turned plaintive. Water flows freely by nature; only meeting high stone does it feel obstructed, and the one word holds the relation of water and rock. Cold in the sunlight is cold on the green pines works the same way: sunlight is warm, yet among dense pines what shows is cold. Both words are the effect of scenery on the senses rather than the scenery itself. Wang Wei's landscape writing often works at these fine sensory shifts.
「毒龙」的佛教背景 · The Buddhist Background of the Poison Dragon
「毒龙」出自《涅槃经》等佛典,比喻人心中难以降伏的欲望与妄念。用这个词,说明王维此行的目的不只是游览,而是修行。末联把前面的寻寺、听钟、看泉、感冷,都收束到「安禅」这一个动作上。山中的一切景物,最后都成了修行的场景。理解这层宗教意味,才能读出这首诗不只是山水诗,也是一首修行诗。
The poison dragon comes from Buddhist texts such as the Nirvana Sutra and figures the desires and delusions in the mind that are hard to subdue. Its use shows that Wang Wei's purpose here was not sightseeing but practice. The last couplet gathers the searching, the bell, the spring, and the cold into a single act: sitting in meditation. Every feature of the hills becomes, in the end, the setting of practice. Only with this religious sense does the poem read as a poem of practice and not merely of landscape.