52. Watching a Pupil of Lady Gongsun Dance the Sword Dance, with Preface | Du Fu
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大历二年十月十九日,夔府别驾元持宅,见临颍李十二娘舞剑器,壮其蔚跂,问其所师,曰:「余公孙大娘弟子也。」开元五载,余尚童稚,记于郾城观公孙氏舞剑器浑脱,浏漓顿挫,独出冠时。
English translation
On the nineteenth day of the tenth month of Dali 2, at the house of Yuan Chi, assistant prefect of Kuizhou, I watched Li the Twelfth of Linying dance the Sword Dance. Marveling at its vigor and lift, I asked who had taught her. She said: I am a pupil of Lady Gongsun. In the fifth year of Kaiyuan I was still a child, and I remember watching Lady Gongsun dance the Sword Dance and the Hunduo at Yancheng — brimming, checked and released, the finest of her day.
The preface sets two dates side by side: the pupil I saw myself, and Lady Gongsun herself, whom I saw as a boy. Fifty years lie between, and the whole poem's sense of time is fixed here.
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自高头宜春、梨园二伎坊内人,洎外供奉舞女,晓是舞者,圣文神武皇帝初,公孙一人而已。
English translation
From the palace women of the two inner troupes, Yichun and the Pear Garden, down to the dancers in outside imperial service, those who understood this dance in the early years of the Emperor of Sacred Letters and Divine Arms came to one person only: Lady Gongsun.
Yichun and the Pear Garden were the court music-and-dance establishments under Emperor Xuanzong. One person only is where she stood then, and it measures the emptiness after.
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玉貌锦衣,况余白首;今兹弟子,亦匪盛颜。
English translation
She had her jade face and brocade dress — and now I am white-haired myself. This pupil before me is no longer in the bloom of youth either.
Three dwindlings in one breath: hers, mine, the pupil's. He writes aging before he writes dancing.
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既辨其由来,知波澜莫二。
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Once I had traced where she came from, I knew the flow was one and the same.
Whose waves are not two means a single line of descent. The figure treats the dance as water: source and branch are the same.
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抚事慷慨,聊为《剑器行》。
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Stirred by what came back to me, I have written this Song of the Sword Dance for what it is worth.
A short close, shutting the preface. The word for what it is worth is self-deprecation — and also the sign that he had to write it.
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往者吴人张旭善草书书帖,数尝于邺县见公孙大娘舞西河剑器,自此草书长进,豪荡感激,即公孙可知矣。
English translation
In the past, Zhang Xu of Wu, master of cursive script, saw Lady Gongsun dance the West River Sword Dance at Yexian several times, and from then on his cursive advanced, sweeping and stirred. From that, one may guess what she was.
He makes the dance visible sideways, through Zhang Xu's brushwork. The dance is gone; the cursive remains, and its force is where the dance still lives.
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昔有佳人公孙氏,一舞剑器动四方。
English translation
There was once a beauty, a woman of the Gongsun house; one dance of the Sword Dance shook the four quarters.
The opening leaps from the preface back to her prime. It sets the scale first; the detail comes later.
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观者如山色沮丧,天地为之久低昂。
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The onlookers stood thick as a mountain, their faces fallen; sky and earth rose and sank with her, and did not stop.
He writes the crowd and the cosmos instead of the dancer. One layer of indirection, and the weight of the dance is there.
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霍如羿射九日落,矫如群帝骖龙翔。
English translation
Swift as Hou Yi shooting down the nine suns; lithe as the assembled lords of heaven driving dragons in flight.
Two similes stacked, one of speed, one of soaring. Both are motions of the sky; there is no earthly equivalent.
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来如雷霆收震怒,罢如江海凝清光。
English translation
She comes like thunder gathering its wrath back in; she ends like rivers and seas frozen into clear light.
Coming and ceasing mark the rise and the close. That she can stop cleanly is what shows the reserve behind it.
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绛唇珠袖两寂寞,晚有弟子传芬芳。
English translation
Red lips and pearl sleeves, both now still; and yet a pupil carries the fragrance on.
Both takes in lips and sleeves, and also dancer and dance. Carries the fragrance on is the hinge that pulls her prime back to the present.
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临颍美人在白帝,妙舞此曲神扬扬。
English translation
The beauty of Linying is here in Baidi, dancing this piece with her spirit lifted high.
Li the Twelfth from the preface now takes the stage. Baidi is Kuizhou, where Du Fu was living.
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与余问答既有以,感时抚事增惋伤。
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Her answers to my questions had given me the whole line of it; feeling the times and touching the old matter, my regret deepens.
The question and answer of the preface close here. Feeling the times is not only about the dance; it points to the years after the An Lushan rebellion.
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先帝侍女八千人,公孙剑器初第一。
English translation
The late emperor's attendant women numbered eight thousand; Lady Gongsun's sword dance stood first among them.
Eight thousand is a round number set against the single first place of one woman — the sheer count of the high age against one name.
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五十年间似反掌,风尘澒洞昏王室。
English translation
Fifty years turn over like a hand; the dust of war spread and darkened the royal house.
Fifty years as one turn of the palm — the two dates of the preface fuse into this line. One person's aging and a dynasty's decline overlap.
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梨园子弟散如烟,女乐余姿映寒日。
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The Pear Garden's young performers scattered like smoke; what is left of the women's music shows against the cold sun.
Scattered like smoke picks up the darkened royal house. In numbers no one stands out; once they are gone, a single figure becomes history.
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金粟堆前木已拱,瞿塘石城草萧瑟。
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Before the Jinsu mound the trees have grown to a full embrace; by the stone wall of Qutang the grass is bleak.
Jinsu mound is Emperor Xuanzong's tomb. Trees thick enough to encircle a man give time its measure. The stone wall is Qutang at Kuizhou.
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玳筵急管曲复终,乐极哀来月东出。
English translation
On the tortoiseshell banquet the urgent pipes play, the piece ends once more; joy reaches its height, grief follows, and the moon comes up in the east.
This performance ends too. Joy at its height, grief comes is the turn of the poem, and his mood at this moment.
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老夫不知其所往,足茧荒山转愁疾。
English translation
This old man does not know where he is going; his feet are calloused, and in the barren hills his sorrow only quickens.
The close comes back from the dance to a pair of feet. The dance is over, the man still has to walk, and the sorrow settles onto the ground.
赏析 · Commentary
「一舞剑器动四方」:不写舞,写看舞的人 · One Dance of Hers Shook the Four Quarters: Writing the Audience, Not the Dance
杜甫写公孙大娘的舞,很少正面描摹身段。起手「一舞剑器动四方」,四方是被震动的一方;接着「观者如山色沮丧」,沮丧的是观众;再往上「天地为之久低昂」,连天地都跟着起伏。真正的主角始终隔着一层。人看不见的舞,反而靠四周的反应量出了大小。这种写法与他后来写画马、写剑器一脉相承:力不在物本身,在物所及之处。
Du Fu rarely describes Lady Gongsun's body or steps head-on. He opens with one dance of hers, and the sword's breath shook the four quarters — the four quarters are what gets shaken. Then the onlookers stand thick as a mountain, their faces fallen — the faces that fall belong to the crowd. Above them, sky and earth rose and sank with her. The dancer herself stays one layer away throughout. A dance no one can see is measured by what it moves around it. It is the same method he later uses for horses and for the sword: the force is never in the thing, but in what the thing reaches.
序里并排的两个日期 · The Two Dates Side by Side in the Preface
序交代得很清楚:大历二年,看的是公孙大娘的弟子李十二娘;开元五年,看的是公孙大娘本人。前后相隔五十年。杜甫没有把这两次观看说成怀旧的感慨,而是把两个日期原样摆出来,让它们自己形成落差。到了「五十年间似反掌」,落差就合成一句。个人的白头与王室的风尘、梨园子弟的散尽,在这一个「反掌」里叠在一起。序写得像记事,正是为了给后面的抒情留出空间。
The preface is precise: in the second year of Dali he watched Li the Twelfth, a pupil of Lady Gongsun; in the fifth year of Kaiyuan he watched Lady Gongsun herself. Fifty years lie between. Du Fu does not turn the two viewings into nostalgia; he sets the dates down as they are and lets the gap form on its own. By fifty years turn over like a hand, the gap has fused into a single line. His own white hair, the dust of war over the royal house, the Pear Garden scattered like smoke — all of it overlaps in that one turn of the palm. The preface reads like a plain record precisely so that the lyric that follows has room.
借张旭的草书,留住看不见的舞 · Holding the Unseen Dance in Zhang Xu's Cursive
序的末尾忽然写张旭。这位草书大家屡次看公孙大娘舞《西河剑器》,从此草书长进,「豪荡感激」。杜甫没有试图把舞复原,他找到一条还在流通的通道:舞消失了,被舞改写过的笔迹还在纸上。张旭的字成了舞的替身。这也是全诗之所以还能写下去的理由——五十年后剩下什么?剩下一段笔迹、一个弟子的身段,以及一个老人脚下走不完的荒山。末句「足茧荒山」正是这个答案。
At the end of the preface Zhang Xu appears out of nowhere. The great cursive master watched Lady Gongsun dance the West River Sword Dance several times, and afterward his cursive advanced, sweeping and stirred. Du Fu does not try to restore the dance. He finds a channel still open: the dance is gone, but the brushstrokes it rewrote are still on paper. Zhang Xu's characters become a stand-in for the dance. This is also what lets the poem continue at all — what remains after fifty years? A stretch of brushwork, a pupil's steps, and the barren hills an old man cannot walk out of. The last line, feet calloused in the barren hills, is the answer.