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104. Mount Zhongnan | Wang Wei

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Taiyi nears the celestial capital; the linked peaks run to the sea's edge.

Taiyi is another name for Mount Zhongnan, and the celestial capital is where the gods dwell. The opening couplet uses hyperbole for the mountain's height and reach, setting a grand scale for the poem.

Looking back, white clouds have closed up; walking in, the blue haze is gone.

The couplet writes the illusions of climbing: the clouds are there when you look back and have closed over; the haze is there in the distance and gone when you come near. It gives the experience of mountain scenery changing with distance.

At the central peak the star-field shifts; across the many valleys sun and shade differ.

The star-field is the old correspondence between constellations and regions. That the central peak divides two star-fields tells how great the mountain is. Within one mountain, valley by valley the weather differs, writing its intricate climate.

I would find a place with people and stay the night; across the water I ask a woodcutter.

The last couplet drops from the mountain's grandeur to a single act: asking the way. The vastness before and the smallness of a person after, the closing and opening together make the mountain feel larger still.

赏析 · Commentary

一首诗怎样写出一座大山 · How One Poem Gives the Measure of a Mountain

写一座大山很难，因为它太大，无法一眼看尽。王维的办法是从四个角度切进去：首联写高和远（近天都、接海隅），颔联写云和雾随距离变化，颈联写星野和气候的地域差异，末联写人在山中的渺小。四个角度分别对应高度、距离、广度、体量，合起来把终南山写成了一个可以进入、可以迷路、需要问路的实体。这种多角度写法，比一味堆砌形容词有力。

A great mountain is hard to write because it is too large to take in at once. Wang Wei cuts in from four angles: the opening gives height and reach (near the celestial capital, running to the sea's edge), the second the way cloud and haze change with distance, the third the regional differences of star-field and weather, the last a person's smallness within the mountain. The four answer to height, distance, breadth, and mass, and together they make Mount Zhongnan something one can enter, get lost in, and need directions through. Such multiple angles carry more than piling up adjectives.

「青霭入看无」的经验 · The Experience of the Haze Being Gone

「白云回望合，青霭入看无」写的是登山时的一种错觉。远看山腰有云雾，回头再看，云雾已经合拢；看远处的青色雾气，走近了却发现什么都没有。这种经验只有真正登过山的人才写得出来。它的价值不在修辞，而在准确——写出了山里光线、雾气、距离之间微妙的关系。王维是画家，对这类视觉现象格外敏感。

Looking back, white clouds have closed up; walking in, the blue haze is gone writes an illusion of climbing. In the distance there is mist at the mountain's waist, and looking back it has closed over; the blue haze is visible far off and nothing is there when you arrive. Only a man who has truly climbed could write it. Its value is not in rhetoric but in accuracy — it renders the subtle relations of light, mist, and distance in the hills. Wang Wei was a painter, acutely sensitive to such visual matters.

末联问路的作用 · What Asking the Way Does at the End

前面三联都在高处、远处看山，末联忽然落到地面：我要找个地方过夜，隔着溪水问樵夫。这一落，诗就从「看山」变成了「在山里」。人一旦进入山，山就有了体量——能让人迷路、需要问路的山，才是真的大。而且樵夫这个角色很有意味：山里的原住民，是唯一熟悉这座山的人。一个从外面来的人，终究要向他请教。

Three couplets look at the mountain from height and distance; the last drops to the ground: I would find a place to stay and ask a woodcutter across the water. With the drop, the poem goes from looking at the mountain to being in it. Once a person enters, the mountain gains mass — a mountain you can get lost in and must ask directions through is truly large. And the woodcutter is telling: the native of the hills is the only one who knows them. A man from outside must, in the end, ask him.

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